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My target audience said that my double page spread had an unconventional layout which is good because they liked how it differed from existing products. They also found that the it is clear as to what the article is about, and the image related to the article itself.
Feedback suggested that I could include another quote on left side of page to fill white space. And the layout of some pull quotes could do with some work as it is not as neat as the rest of the article.
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However, peers said that the conventional layout of larger font sized pull quote immediately sets the tone of the article and helps to demonstrate how the artist wishes to portray themself. But too much dead space on left hand side.
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The quote 'I'm back and I mean business' is straight to the point therefore readers know what article is about. The use of 'Selina' goin up the side was considered unique and eyecatching, and they liked the clear dominating image supported by her name going up the page.
However, the album description is a little too small at first glance therefore hard to promote the album.
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